I’m a rich kid with a lot of money
I have a personal bodyguard and three cars
But I sometimes feel strangely funny
When I lie awake watching the stars
For I may have a playstation and the latest game
And all the record labels in the store
Yet I sometimes wish that I could claim
That I have something I want evermore
I dream of lovers holding hands
And kissing gently beneath the sky
Or sharing their tacos at the stands
But that’s something money can’t buy
I dream of gardens and the sea
And two souls oblivious to all that
Whispering sweet nothings softly
Lost in their subliminal chat
I have a fast bike that can fly
But I have no one to share the ride
I have company in laughter but I’m alone when I cry
I wish I had a lover by my side
If I could trade all that I possess
For a humble wish from Above
I’d forget about playthings and fancy dresses
And wish for one true love.
21 comments:
good...but i am just wondering - why it has to be a lover always when it comes to love???
ohh this was really nice!!! i m wondering the same thing as 'Lancelot' *umm...is he a knight?! ;)* n also wht the person who got the 1st place wrote... if its one of urs friends then put it here too.. wud love to read..
P.S: i m thinking of dhapping this topic to put on the community..i m sure there will be interestin replies.. hehe..
@ Lancelot & Ice - thanks and they specified that it has to be this kind of love. I asked them personally.
@ Ice... post the replies on your blog... must be a fun read :)
@ Ice Maiden:
Lancelot need not be a knight alone you know- he can be a pirate in the disguise of a lawyer or even a MI6 agent with call sign of double O and seven..
@ blogger mouth
oh seems like too much ulkuthu (internal politics) in giving that specific topic...and out of blog question are u a catering expert??
I know Rassum(the Indian soup)but what is Frassum? French rasamaa? :P :P :P
i wud have given u first prize for that poem :)
*applauds*
You truly deserved the accolades. Btw , I loved the first stanza:-)
You truly deserve the accolades. I especially loved reading the first stanza:-)
the poem is actually cute!!! :) you deserve it.. ! Congrats!!!
@ swati
u totally rocked jhankaar :) love u...!!!
that was so nice re
sex! :D :)) i say sex only when somethin is super dooper cool! i liked it!
@ Lance - rassum frassum is the way Mr. Mutley, my childhood cartoon entertainer cursed.
@ Mayz - Remind me to kidnap you for the next competition as the judge
@ Chew - Thanks and incidentally, the first stanza is my fav too :)
@ Thoorika - Thanks :D :D
@ Elith - Thanks hon you rocked too! Love ya
@ Manjari - Thanks :) Glad you liked
@ Apurva - That's a sex comment :P Thanks!
i see thanks for the info :)
Really well written...you know this reminds me of a phase of my own life when I was growing up, with all comforts but very less freedom
If you could polish this furthermore, I could guarantee that this could claim a first place. But, I write so keeping in mind the chances of converting this to a song. So, pardon me.
You see, it has already got a punk/rock n roll kinda beat to it. So, you are already in the zone.
Keep writing!!!
neenga terror effet kodukureengo. with your writing...
Was an Awesome read! :)
and quoting anonymous
"This was Swati's jhankar!"
Wow, I like this. :)
Especially beacuse I have wealthy friends who may not have had the most genuine lover due to the fact that the guy/girl is interested mostly in their money!
Thanks you guys :)
woah!! good stuff !! blog hopped my way here...brilliant find :D
cheers!
@ Mon - merci beaucoup! Glad you liked :)
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