Saturday, February 21, 2009

Life is a storm cloud

**I wrote this for my ten year old cousin and she urged me to put it up on here. So yeh go ahead, have a laugh at my terrible writing skills and dance like mavericks at the grave of my dead muses.**

Just when you think that it's all over
Life gives you a sudden cheer
If all your worries would sink any lower
You'd wonder if they were ever here

Some memories fade and some linger
Some seem like they happened yesterday
Like the song of a soulful singer
They often rewind in your head and play

Distant dreams look closer now
All your wishes come true somehow
Your heart wants to sing in glee
You want to dance because you feel free
Say it once, say it again out loud
Life is a moving storm cloud

Just when you thought you'd never find love
Life gives you a surprise
Like a blessing from the heaven above
Like an angel in disguise

Some friends go and some stay
Some come into your life late
But I'll think you'd agree that any day
They make your simple life great

Happy times are closer now
All your tears seem to dry somehow
You can't help but nod and smile
At how it seemed over before a little while
Sing it once sing it out loud
Life is a moving storm cloud

12 comments:

ki said...

Life is a moving storm cloud.

Makes sense. :)

Miss Cynical ღ Åйu ღ said...

Simple. Crisp. and Clear.
I simply love the way you write!

Also, this can be composed into a song!! ;)

cheers!!
>:D< :-*

Pesto Sauce said...

Well written...that is some neat poetry

I saw Slumdog...u r right, its a mix of here & there actually

Writing for Crows said...

Lovely. Yes I would sing this.

chewmysambhar said...

Beautiful:-)

BloggerMouth said...

@Ki - Yeah I hope my little girl gets it too :)

@Anu - Thanks hon you're very encouraging :)

@Pesto... I'll be nice and not say "I told you so" :P

@J - Thanks. That's a hell of a compliment coming from you.

@Chew - Thanks for reading. Glad you liked!

Thoorika said...

Not bad yaar !! :)

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Brosreview said...

And, you reckon this is bad, eh? This is quite neat!!! Keep writing!!!

BloggerMouth said...

Thanks =)

Zeba Talkhani said...

If i was complimented more often than i actually am then i would love to sing this as well!! But i am not. so i wont sing it!!

BloggerMouth said...

Lol thanks for the comment Zeba :)